Saturday, October 30, 2010

Quick re-write

I wrote up the first couple scenes of my script, and overall am pretty happy with them. There is one big issue though. In the latest scene where Braden goes to his Grandfather's workshop I wrote in a big contradiction that I have to fix, where Jerome (the grandfather), vents his frustration with modern technology and tells Braden to contact him through magical means, and then Jerome gets angry with Braden for accidentally using magic in a fight earlier. So, yeah, my poor main character got some mixed messages and I need to tweak the scene to make  it play out a little more logically.

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